Advertising are becoming more and more common in everyday life. what are the advantages and disadvantages of advertising?
Advertising has gained popularity not only in marketing products but also in service. In my opinion, advertising can bring about much more benefits for customers compared to any negative influence it might have.
Admittedly, there are a few drawbacks of advertising. Firstly, advertising aims to persuade people buying a product will make them have sense of satisfactory without they need or not. Secondly, the facts show that the more advertising made, the higher the product prices is. People buy advertised products also pay for the high cost of advertisement which covered. Another issue is the customers could not protect their information safely in the online world. Some giant website as Facebook or Google, for instance, can sell users’ browsing history, personal data or email for the others without any permission. So that they could make profit on the Internet.
Nevertheless, despite the disadvantages above, I believe that advertising could bring about far more benefits for buyer. The main aid is that advertising create more job opportunities for those who have passion of advertisement. In other words, it provides occupation for artists, designers or painters in designing and preparing advertised stuffs such as logo, banner or poster. Another benefit is that advertisements is the fastest way to launch a new product in to the market. It provides customers with a range of choices that contributes to improve their comforts and living standards after buying latest-trend products. If advertisement is not made, buyers could not catch up with trend.
In conclusion, creating more job opportunities and giving customers lots of choices experience far outweigh any minor disadvantages that could result from advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for the others without any permission. So that they could make profit on the Internet....
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es that could result from advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04931798802 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0975760381 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257296932958 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906925615222 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741660438497 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165617901294 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475123599586 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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