Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Exploring family background and history is becoming significantly popular in numerous countries all around the world. While many people argue that nowadays they desire to know about their ancestors and family background to protect their traditions as well as their values; however, I would believe that we should pay attention to the new generation because they are our future.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against focus for present and future generations. To use a common example of this practice, people could gain a better understanding of the challenges their ancestors faced so as to inspire great love a compassion for their flaws as well as mistakes. Moreover, they also believe that comprehending family history builds resilience, and that understanding helps them recover and find happiness despite hardships. People, for instance, can see patterns of overcoming failures and surviving hard times if they learn about ancestors’ lives. Additionally, it is often believe that children should experience their family history, so that they develop their unique skills of family that they inherited such as drawing, dancing or singing.
On the other hand, some people assume that learning family history is time-consuming, while focusing on new generation is perfectly favorable. The main reason is that the millennial generation not only look at the world differently than do previous generation, but they also more energetic and dynamic when facing difficulties. Furthermore, they argue that new generation have been received better education to approach well-trained mind, which is extremely necessary to improve national economy as well as their standard of livings. Personally, I definitely agree with the concentration on millennial to help them develop themselves totally, but I feel that it may be necessary to do research on family history to inherit our traditions and experience our ancestor’mistakes.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I think that we should know and develop both family background and young generation as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56211180124 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13091691299 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7874344246 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.25 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218264354536 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796040717811 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611786432567 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147785431626 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320950001164 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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