Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of advertising?
There is an abundance of promoting surrounding our daily life. Although this kind of industry brings to benefits, drawbacks should be considerable.
There are several advantages of advertisements that make it wide-spread. Initially, a product which expected a well-known and high selling must experience marketing stage. Advertisements promote the product to viewers through a wide range of transport (media, poster, social network, etc.), so that people, especially who are in demands, can comprehend about the product which might become their choices. In addition, the needs of advertisement created an enormous industry, providing tons of jobs for employment. Because there are a large number of enterprises and companies which really want to promote their products or services, the advertising industry is potential and thriving fast to meet a need. If this industry doesn’t exist, economy will experience a significant drop and the unemployment will become more serious.
Beside the vital of advertisement, it also has drawbacks that might impact on watcher. Advertisement sometimes is annoying and makes people uncomfortable. For example, video clips consist of advertisements and people have no another ways to watch advertisement before the video. In fact, many people likely is forced to see unessential advertisement, it create a bad feeling and habit of avoiding. Moreover, marketing is complex, so it is spent a large amount of money. As a result, the product has a price which is higher than its original price. This is seemed as inconvenience because larger price is a problem to buyers and an issue about competitive. Without unnecessary advertisement, there will be less complaint about them.
To summarize, advertising boosts the revenue and promotion, but it is annoying and disadvantage in some cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... jobs for employment. Because there are a large number of enterprises and companies which really ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... might impact on watcher. Advertisement sometimes is annoying and makes people uncomfortable...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...nsist of advertisements and people have no another ways to watch advertisement bef...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ed to see unessential advertisement, it create a bad feeling and habit of avoiding. Mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53214285714 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24036838105 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3004311253 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210407723254 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058061081133 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062799632998 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112928434438 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591508811279 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.