The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
The world of employment is remaining unstable and need a very high work performance. So having the same work or the same work conditions is no longer suitable. There are several factors neither solution for employers in general to make some preparations.
This can be attributed to two mainly reasons. Initially, the customer’s demand is rising and very complicated, they require expensive and high-quality products. The enterprises must pursue the innovations and provide productivity and effectiveness. Their recruitment is not easy to pass, they have to choose the best employee with employable skills, who is solution-driven, and self-sufficient. Secondly, the enterprises are competitive, so they have to adapted and constantly improve. Employers need to equip themselves with expertise, and contribute their best to the companies.
In order to adapted with the world of work is shifting at a very fast pace, everybody especially the ones have just graduated should prepares readiness before entering the workforce. As a student in university, they can get used to the working environment from employer trials, so there are no confused when they enter the real workforce. In addition, the employees should have a career motivation; they can cultivate the knowledge and achieve the best work performance. Their eagerness forces them to improve themselves; they could become resourceful, responsible… for example. This might be the common way to satisfy not only the companies but also the customers, the motivation pushes the employer’s ability.
To summarize, the enterprises require the best employment due to the innovations and competitions; therefore, employee needs some preparations for a solid future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'prepare'
Suggestion: prepare
...lly the ones have just graduated should prepares readiness before entering the workforce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63218390805 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35998505457 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3352293083 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251513306061 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834915757375 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10724328393 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172023694707 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124857502468 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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