It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Does the benefit of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?
Globalization has become ever common than ever and the world is getting much closer. Although the benefits are significant, the drawbacks followed are also noticeable.
There are several advantages of globalization that made it popular. Initially, globalization reduces unemployment in developing countries. When there are no boundaries between nations, international companies can access and create tons of jobs for people who are in jobless. The local people can enhance the productivity and effectiveness, they could equip themselves with expertise due to the cooperation with profession came from developed nation. In addition, globalization is the best way to strengthen political relationships. The threat of war will be reduced when the world becomes a global village and that is no longer a concern especially to the leaders and politics. The civilization can exchange their advances and cultures which is the opportunity to enrich the knowledge, broaden the horizon. Moreover, through trading and communication, many people can get helped.
Beside the advantages, globalization is harmful to environment and is the main factor of brain drain. Firstly, people can travels overseas leading to the rapidly growth of flights. Every flights release an amount of gases that caused greenhouse effect, the more flight the more damage to environment. Moreover, globalization means the industry grow up, known as industrialization. As a result, it produces more waste that is challenges to handle and the pollution get more serious. Secondly, when globalization happens, some strategies are taken to attract and gravitate the best academic learner. For example, USA owns the most modern technologies because they were successful in keeping the best scientists and researchers came from multinational.
To summarize, globalization creates jobs and relationships, but it poses a worry to environment and problem of brain drain.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ading to the rapidly growth of flights. Every flights release an amount of gases that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70138888889 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31312595996 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9705156481 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262803957931 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736045681038 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592090396422 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145618821109 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689606697135 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.