In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
Some people in business and education are working harder than others. First this essay will answer the question of “ why some people work harder”? followed by the other question “is it always a good thing to work hard”?
There are different reasons why some workers and students can work better than others, one of them is due to their determination to progress in any field they will enter nor like others.
They want to be better because they have goals to achieve in life and they are pursuing hard for reaching it. For example Mohamed Salah, he choses to be an elite not a regular footballer,
As a result of this every one know and love him.
On the other hand, some people ask: should we always work hard?
The answer is yes doing your best makes you reap what you plant with effort satisfying you with the achievements. Moreover, every time you get tired of your job be sure that there is at least one person who get benefits from you. Maybe he laugh if you are a comedian actor. If you didn’t do ur duty in a right way you may cause problems for several humans as if you was a doctor and didn’t do your exact thing this may accure the patient a severe case. Unlike Salah, Amr Warda is very good example for someone who is not working hard he is just normal this is why No one really love and appreciate him.
To sum up, working hard is not the easiest thing but this is the only right way that you can reach your dreams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, at least, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46125461255 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23570562724 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5205832509 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359228820537 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161901305569 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184716813393 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19001292203 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185446161975 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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