Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and individuals.
Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and individuals.Several humans are thinking that the main reason of schools is turning our offspring into good creatures.
School is the first and best place for all the people that they can built their characters in.
This essay will argue why schools is so important to the children life despite some potential risks.
The people who support the idea of homeschooling to protect their children from the outside danger want just them to be good and kind ones and avoiding any bullies.
Parents can protect them more even though if this will bother heir sons and daughters, they will be safe more than any other place.
For example the famous singer “Adele” was raised only by her mother without going to school every day, and now she became a well known singer world wild.
Despite the minor problems that school may occur, the idea of independency at an early age is the main reason why we leave our babies dealing with the society.
There are many reasons why being responsible and independent is a great thing, one of them that you can deal with any problem yourself not by the help of anyone. For this reason “Angelina Jolie” the Hollywood star is now very successful woman, since when her father left her when she was only eight years old while her mother at the age of six.
Several humans are thinking that the main reason of schools is turning our offspring into good creatures.
School is the first and best place for all the people that they can built their characters in.
This essay will argue why schools is so important to the children life despite some potential risks.
The people who support the idea of homeschooling to protect their children from the outside danger want just them to be good and kind ones and avoiding any bullies.
Parents can protect them more even though if this will bother heir sons and daughters, they will be safe more than any other place.
For example the famous singer “Adele” was raised only by her mother without going to school every day, and now she became a well known singer world wild.
Despite the minor problems that school may occur, the idea of independency at an early age is the main reason why we leave our babies dealing with the society.
There are many reasons why being responsible and independent is a great thing, one of them that you can deal with any problem yourself not by the help of anyone. For this reason “Angelina Jolie” the Hollywood star is now very successful woman, since when her father left her when she was only eight years old while her mother at the age of six.
This essay argued that people who are against their ones to enter an attendance school have a flawed understanding of school life and underestimate the effects of what they believe.
In my opinion letting children enter school is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small risk involved.
This essay argued that people who are against their ones to enter an attendance school have a flawed understanding of school life and underestimate the effects of what they believe.
In my opinion letting children enter school is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small risk involved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Several
...dren into good citizens and individuals.Several humans are thinking that the main reaso...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
... place for all the people that they can built their characters in. This essay will ...
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Line 23, column 69, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
... place for all the people that they can built their characters in. This essay will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2785.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 568.0 315.596192385 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90316901408 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.20363070211 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54211147725 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.301056338028 0.561755894193 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.4015452209 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.590909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280208286728 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10642418377 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168560968309 0.0667982634062 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117066602147 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173228774408 0.056905535591 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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