Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion
some people suppose that employers should be concerned about the quality of employees’ work, but not the way their employees dress because companies profit from their employees’ work, not their employees' clothes.I stronglyagree with this opinion.
if employers pay too much attention to the way their employees dress, employees' daily working may be disturbed. they may not be able to concentrate on their work because they have to concern about whether they dress well. For example, an employee is focused on a tricky problem and suddenly get some idea.if his employer interrupts him at this moment, because he does not wear a tie, he may forget what the idea is.
Another reason is that employees can get more profit for their company as their employers concerned about work quality. if employees can earn more when their work has a high quality, their orking motivation may be greatly boosted.As a result the company can develop healthily.
However, it does not mean th at employees can wear whatever they like. Appropriate dress in public shows a basic manner to others. what is more, some inappropriate dressing may disturb others, which is against the intention of improving work quality.
In conclusion, I would argue that employers should pay more attention to their emplovees’.work gauality. and basic dress code is needed.companies can develop steady and healthy in this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97291144657 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568888888889 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3105548088 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169238145847 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723480108041 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449571926089 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100757332595 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482781102881 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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