Environment problems facing today‘s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Environment problem is the most debating issue in twenty century. By improving technology, the amount of damage to the environment, which have done by human increase year by year. In order to tackle this major issue, the government have great responsible for increasing global awareness of unconscious damages which human is blame for as well as putting a restriction on utilizing fossil fuels.
First and foremost, carbon dioxide is an initial element for air pollution which comes from vehicles. This amount of carbon footprint should be declined by encouraging people to utilize public transportation rather than personal cars specifically in an auto-dependence city such as Tehran, the capital of Iran. This could be feasible merely by a widespread transportation network which government is responsible for. Consequently, while the major preference among people is public transportation, the catastrophic damages to the environment due to exhaust would be declined.
In addition, over using fossil fuels not only produce greenhouse gases but also deplete this source of energy. Thus, utilizing other sources of energy, such as wind power, solar panel, and other environmentally friendly energies should be encouraged and produced by government or large companies. For instance, in Iran government establish turbines in Yazd, one of the windy cities of Iran, in order to produce electricity for city dwellers. In addition, solar cars are exchanged with the petrol ones in sunny cities.
Consequently, government and large companies play crucial roles in preventing further damages to the environment by set up panels and turbines to produce green energies as well as providing available public transportation as an alternative means of transport. Thus, the amount of carbon dioxide emitting from vehicles or burning fossil fuels will be decline.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...em is the most debating issue in twenty century. By improving technology, the amount of...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...olar cars are exchanged with the petrol ones in sunny cities. Consequently, gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56890459364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10166445499 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2208428116 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245035100053 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820675532159 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475185339252 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143114595178 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356492541325 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.