The environment problems facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that this day environmental pollution is a heated topic concerning many individuals, businesses and governments. While I accept that governments and large enterprises ought to hold responsibility for the contamination into the environment, I would argue that each individual also makes contribution to improving this universal problem.
Nations and corporations all over the world should proactively be in charge of acute environmental issues due to their tremendous impact. First, in the process of producing products, a great deal of pollutant are dumped into ocean or landfills, which results in serious pollution. Consequently, not only large but also small and medium enterprises should be blame for the environmental contamination. The government also plays an important role in diminishing the issue. Because we need a large amount of money to deal with this problem so the government should channel the national fund into this field.
However, each individual can do a lot of things to reduce the damage that people have done to the environment. If people are aware of the environment, they will be able to more conscious of what they have done to their surrounding habitat. One person may not have an obvious influence on the environment but lots of people may make a difference to this heated issue. Therefore, ordinary people can contribute a lot to enhancing the condition if they have enough knowledge about the environment and their effect on it.
In conclusion, It seems to me that while it is clear that governments and corporations have charge of the pollutant released into the environment, each individual can also take steps to reduce the seriousness of this problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'blamed'?
Suggestion: blamed
... small and medium enterprises should be blame for the environmental contamination. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17018947428 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9530160484 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314701155158 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107480625588 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061669508836 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165330187478 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469319958751 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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