At this moment in time, some harmful threats have been creeping into climate and cause plenty of severe circumstances. Consequently, authorities have a power to cope with this issue and destructive effects will be eluded from environment as well as doing some impressive deeds in order to protect against problems. From my point of view, despite the fact that politicians have a major impact throughout this issue, citizens have also have principal roles to tackle the problem.
First and foremost, some would argue that a blend of both subjects and government leads nation to be in a right way. Indeed, some intense difficulties such as gas fuel consumption, over population and waste disposal give rise climate to become worse. In addition, government has a right to hire some sophisticated staff and also put a compulsory lesson in high school for youths to be taught. Furthermore, reducing the personal vehicle’s usage as well as being enthusiastic about recycling are people’s responsibility. That is, contribution among people and politicians would have so beneficial and effective.
On the other hand, full consensus has been available between other people that they are devoid of any useful power in order to restrict problem’s effect. Furthermore, lack of knowledge about how this condition will be handled is so conspicuous inside their perceptions. Personally, I don’t lean towards this approach due to in order to remove hurdles and avoiding form getting deteriorate, people should change their behaviors and stimulate some ideas for instance tending themselves to use public transportation instead of personal cars and cut down water’s usage and economize it.
Overall, it stands to reason that dealing with this situation is vitally important if nations out reach together and try to preserve fossil fuel and make it to be sustainable later on. A good compromise is needed to maintain these criteria and manage industrial facilities.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 72
- Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- In poorer families school children may have to work part time as well as study Discuss the merits and demerits for these children 89
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 73
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
...roughout this issue, citizens have also have principal roles to tackle the problem. ...
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...jects and government leads nation to be in a right way. Indeed, some intense difficulties such...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as for, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36569579288 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97344615809 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.218257524 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15193606647 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525622337646 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378499308609 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840855387236 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415032966365 0.056905535591 73% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.