Euthanasia is the practice of ending the life of a terminally ill patient or someone in a great pain. A few countries in the world allow euthanasia to be practiced by doctors, though it is still a very controversial issue.
What is your opinion on the matter?
Euthanasia, or assisted suicide,means to take a deliberate action in order to help patients en the intractable suffering and pain. Recently, despite the public disagreement, some countries still legalise euthanasia which is conducted by doctors. Personally, I strongly believe that euthanasia should be allowed on many grounds.
In reality, voluntary euthanasia does not violate human right. Only patients who experience the intense pain comprehend exactly what they should do to overcome everything, so giving them an option to make their own decision is typically essential. Besides, it is totally legal because the cornerstone of liberal democracies is the freedom of choice, undoubtedly. Moreover, all what patients suffer is not only physical pain, but it also is emotional pain. This is evidenced by patients are frequently in a tendency of overthinking, in other words, they think that getting accurate disease means they lose independence as well as become the family's financial burden. Thus, euthanasia is the best way to get over those painful feelings, and somehow, it makes patients rest in peace with a smile of a contentment. Finally, instead of going on tolerating the extreme pain, it is more humane to allow people to choose assisted death which is carried out by their doctors. For example, the cancer patients, during the treatment period, face with suffering and horrible pain because of radiotherapy; and sometimes, at the terminal stage, recovery is impossible. Therefore, a choice of euthanasia is much more better than any recent treatments, which is asked to be praticed by doctors as a patient's wish in the last day of life.
However, opponents believe that there is no reliable reason to allow euthanasia althought patients want to or not. The modern medical technology is drastically developing, and instead of choosing euthanasia, patients should believe in the positive effects of painkillers and antibiotics to improve their health status. Furthermore, many people think euthanasia, sometimes, is not decided by patients because they are in the coma or they lost their consciousness. That means the choice belongs to the others who are incompetent and want to take advantages form patients.
In conclusion, euthanasia, in some cases, should be taken into consideration as an option for those who suffer from intense pain. It is possible to legalise euthanasia in the future if the crictics put themselves into patients' shoes; and they may realize that they could not withhold patients' wishes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , means
Euthanasia, or assisted suicide,means to take a deliberate action in order to...
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...erefore, a choice of euthanasia is much more better than any recent treatments, which is as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36523929471 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98541057588 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566750629723 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7968847152 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238863713657 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791904229083 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427619260164 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159928900889 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442201425346 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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