Euthanasia is the practice of ending the life of terminally ill patients or someone in a great pain. A few countries in the world allow euthanasia to be praticed by doctors, though it is still a very controversial issue?
What is your opinion on the matter?
Euthanasia, recently, is known as assisted suicide or is took into consideration as mercy killing, which means to take a deliberate action in order to help terminal patients end the intractable suffering and pain. Despite the public disagreement in many countries, euthanasia is still legalised in somewhere around the world. From my perspective, I strongly believe that there are some meaningful and convincing reasons to allow euthanasia worldwide.
Firstly, voluntary euthanasia does not violate the human right because of patients' choice. The cornerstone of liberal democracies is the freedom of choice; and for those who suffer from terrible pain, making their own decision to terminate their life is admittedly legal since that is their competence. Additionally, only patients who suffer intense pain experience what and how those feelings affect to their life quality, which noone can fully appriciate. Although medical treatment is able to reduce the physical pain, the emotional pain of losing independence and becoming a family's burden is impossible to refuse. Thus, euthanasia is the most effective way so as to patients overcome those horrible emotions and make them satisfy with life as much as possible. Finally, assisted death should be allowed. People, who witness the slow death of others, could convince that euthanasia is wholly suggested to be conducted by dotors. At the later date, instead of tolerating the extreme pain, it is much better for patients to be put to the death as wel as ending the emotional suffering of their beloved family. Futhermore, it is more humane to allow peole to choose to terminate that great pain.
Nonetheless, some people believe that those above reasons are not reliable and too convincing to let the public accept euthanasia. When advanced medical technology is drastically developing, painkillers and antibiotics can tackle the seriouspain. In other words, patients do not need to be disappointed and choose euthanasia. Moreover, it is totally wrong despite mercy killing. Somehow, patients are in a coma and euthanasia is their family's choice, which is illegal because noone could be competent to decide other's life.
In conclusion, euthanasia cound be a positive option for those who suffer from both physical and emotional pain. The crictics are still defensing against this stance, but people have their own choice and government has no right to withhold their wishes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'letting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: letting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, thus, as to, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3664921466 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85101009215 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568062827225 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1990365891 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.894736842 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258894429307 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817619337617 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448231542485 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159189053529 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478078073469 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.