Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
In the state of this art society, there are many poor people around a city, or in a country that include people has low income, homeless, orphan children,.… several situation like that. In order that answer for the question what are some of the reasons for world poverty? , how can the poor be helped? this essay will discuss and explain about this questions.
In my point of views, I think in society today, rich and poor is a normal issue, so that make for the balance between human with human. However, there are many reasons that can reveal why are they poor? Firstly, the main reason is the war, after many wars with invade purpose. Consequently, A country couldn’t develop because the effect from bullet and bomb, thus, it made for the economy of some nations such as Viet Nam, Lao, Cambodia where fell into miserable status. Secondly, this is racist with people who has black skin. In many years ago, black skin people had to become slave for white skin people, with disregarding and exploiting that why today, some countries in Africa still poverty. The second reason derived from the main reason, when the nation less progress, hence, the crime and the robber occur because they don’t have enough food and shelter. Actually, the government doesn’t have enough finance in other that support for residents. In another hand, there are several situation that are some people, they used heroin and banned substance, then, they had to sell all your goods and became a homeless, or their family so poor but they lazy and don’t have any efforts on their life, when they growth up, and still can’t release poverty.
Addition, depend on finance of the nation, the government were going to pay an amount of money which could help for the poor. For instance, in America, they have some box food site in the street that will help someone need it. In Vietnam, they have some box of bread and ice tea in the pavement. In another countries, they have charity activities, provide house and food for elder and orphan, or organize program and TV show use this money to help the poor.
In conclusion, all of this info above explained for this problem, and the way the president deal with the poor. I don’t know how will we live in the future, but I hope each country can gather and support together, make for a steady economy background, then, the quality of human life will be improve that equal with the poor will down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7676056338 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29608303933 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546948356808 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0471355322 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.894736842 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360016215661 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121643663769 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982762220285 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240612655454 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741418088507 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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