Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Health of citizens is one of the driving factors of progress and an indication of future prospects of a country. As it is mandatory to take care of health of public, I agree that, government needs to provide some of the health services free of cost although it may not be feasible to provide expensive treatments. The core reasons are as follows.
Firstly, every person cannot afford health services due to their financial status. Thereby, their health impacts their profession and indirectly the prospects of the nation. To mitigate this, administration can initiate a scheme to provide co...
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Dear Sir, Please suggest what
Dear Sir,
Please suggest what can be a possible replacement for "On the other hand" for that paragraph.
Regards
Kishore
Simply use 'Third' or 'In
Simply use 'Third' or 'In addition'.
Try this pattern to get better Coherence:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
'On the other hand' means 'However'. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 277 350
No. of Characters: 1423 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.137 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.721 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.799 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.603 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5