Many people believe that healthcare cost in a country should always be borne by its government however they also think that latest medical treatments can be charged as it puts a lot of burden on government's budget to bear those costs. I strongly agree with this statement and in this essay I am going to discuss few reasons behind my opinion.
To begin with, free medical treatment except for the latest medical treatments gives everyone at least a chance to be treated. People tend to follow their dreams, even if it includes risks of injury, once they know that they are taken care medically. For instance, Canada is once such country that offers free healthcare to its citizens. As per one of the study, a lot of people in Canada are active in mountaineering and skiing activities as compared to the USA where health treatment is very expensive.
However, free healthcare comes at a greater cost to the government and providing the advanced medical treatments will result in even huge burden on the government's healthcare budget. This might even result in to huge tax burdens on the citizens and hence throw the country in economic slowdown. For example, India, when ruled by British, had an economic slowdown because of huge tax that British had to charge to provide Medicare to the country men.
In nutshell, providing Medicare for free is a boon for countrymen and has great advantages. However, it can only be sustained to a certain extent and not all the medical treatments can be given for free. This essay believes that if someone needs access to the latest medical treatments then that person might as well be ready to pay for it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... will result in even huge burden on the governments healthcare budget. This might even resu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, well, at least, except for, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81338028169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57159677983 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6477927513 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293176509274 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105995549067 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044790181708 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175085408918 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451152241506 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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