Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another, in what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is history important to society?
It is true that the history has always been a vital part of human cultures for a range of reasons, this significant subject could be transferred from one generation to another by means of various ways which will be discussed.
Learning the history is considered as one of the most beneficial scientific courses for societies. In fact, being familiar with the historical background, communities are provided with a sense of identity, assisting them to gain a deep insight into understanding themselves. In addition, the history is stated to be repeated by itself over the time. As a result, contemporary people would be able to take the past events into their account as a gazing stock, avoiding to make similar mistakes and learning lessons from positive incidents around the world. For instance, studying Japan's history, particularly after the Atomic Bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, can be extremely informative for countries wanting to find an effective policy to progress.
Given to the great importance of the history, mentioned above, keeping it is absolutely crucial. There are several methods to transmit the history throughout time. Firstly, written documents are known as the most common ways to record the events during the various eras. For example, valuable painting keeping in museums or historical books written by famous historian are virtually trustworthy and credible sources. Secondly, the monuments, built according to the related contemporary culture in each time, are able to convey the correct message of its folk. Finally, narrating the significant incidents as a legend orally, the ancestors play a pivotal role to pass on the untold historical facts.
In conclusion, history is as important as other sciences to help the society think analytically and it should be transmitted to the next age group correctly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90737896908 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632302405498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6033334625 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.384615385 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29459990492 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950595688772 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822079235094 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17000517956 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253464106162 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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