Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
Today's human is confronting environmental problems that are more taxing than ever before, some of them seemingly insoluble. While some argue that it is the responsibility of each country to address these issues, I believe that establishing an International organization would be more effective.
The natural world in which we are living can be considered as a correlated ecosystem. It means that making artificial change or disturbing one part can inevitably have a negative impact on biodiversity and hence our ecosystem. Therefore, the environmental problems made in a particular area will not be solved unless there is an overall view than them, which is practicable just by running a global organization. Amazon Forests located in Brazil is an obvious example of this playing a vital role to supply about 25% of required Oxygen for people around the world to be live. If there had been an International institution to supervise over deforestation in these areas, contemporary irreversible changes such as global warming, deriving from cutting down trees inordinately, would not emerge now.
At the same time, some nations are not able to tackle their environmental problems lonely in terms of financial or technological issues. For instance, most of poor African countries consisting of a considerable percentage of world population do not have access to clean water, resulting in high mortality rate. They need to be supported financially which can be the responsibility of an International group. In addition, in some other countries, like IRAN, although there is sufficient fiscal resources, the government suffers from not having modern technology to address environmental problems.
In conclusion, although it seems that each nation should rely on itself to tackle the issues related to the environment, in my opinion, International Organization can deal with these problems more successfully.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49659863946 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28420691892 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6495865771 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250005781524 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854017454214 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711100597024 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153760969748 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296941595161 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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