Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is clear that the death of several languages each years has been receiving a great deal of social attention due to its substantial impacts on human civilizaion. Some people believe that the extinction of language is not serious problem since comunication is tend to be more easier with fewer language. Although this phenomenon creates lots of positive effects on society, I am firmly convinced that the diversify of the world language has many benefits outweight drawbacks.
To begin with, the lost of language seems to pose some potential threats, in terms of losing the diversification and uniqueness of culture in each countries. In any historical time period, It's very vulnerable that language plays a fundamental role not only in contributing citizens'civilizaiton but also in the representation of a community. Beside that, the extinction of language may creates difficulties for researchers to explore the features of considerable areas in the world. According to many researchs, language is considered to be a key factor of a country since the element added on interfacts, historical anaylists, able to understand the profound life of inhabitants in that land. Therefore, the aspect of diversified language is critical value of cultural in an attempt to maintain and develop humanity.
Secondly, no one could deny that the lost of language is likely to put an end to majority of jobs related to translation. This influence not only inspires some fear among employment section but also puts a huge burden on goverment, who need shoulder their duties to reduce the drawbacks of this phenomenon. Moreover, acquiring a new language instead of mother tounge linguistic seems to be an obstacle that prevent individuals from pursuing their desired job.
To conclude, the death of language will definitely cause numerous unaticipated neagative impacts on human life. Therefore we need to take responsible for maintainance and development of language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... on society, I am firmly convinced that the diversify of the world language has many benefits...
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...ut also puts a huge burden on goverment, who need shoulder their duties to reduce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2031948232 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1441177945 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268690190763 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847194961616 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488139404733 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150579401071 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614527934835 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.