Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is clear that recent years have seen a surge in the number of scientific research. Although many people believe that private companies play a more important role in conducting and controlling this sector, I firmly convince that being managed by government will be better.
To begin with, there are some benefits of authorities taking care of scientific researches. Firstly, governments tend to be an obstacle that prevent private companies from posing the threats of inhumane behaviour in the future through conducting some violated experiments. Lack of social spirit, companies emphasize maximizing profits rather than helping all citizens, in terms of causing habitat loss or rasing crime in an attempt to pursue marginal income targets. Secondly, the government is capable of providing financial assistance to various researches projects. In some urgent cases, if the projects fail to achive its projective, the government has the resources to cope up with losses incurred. The more scientific researches governments control, the less stagnant experiments have to face with.
However, I strongly believe that privates companirs need to shoulder their duties donating funds to boost both economy and society through such potential projects. Some huge scientific researches require the participation of thousand scientists associated with the corporation of various institutions, and all these requirements are needed the sufficient financial supports, which results in seeking sponsors to meet growing demand of humans. Therefore, private companies also play a vital resouces with extensive scientific researches.
To conclude, both private companies and governments make signifiant contribution for scientific experiment's growth. However, governments should take the leading role since they able to contribute non-profit projects, social issues and its financial supports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89377289377 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.973948437 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652014652015 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7549777522 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.769230769 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25705722356 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891178904144 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535817449715 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155396103864 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580968881311 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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