Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is the fact that there are abundant variety of languages all over the globe, but sadly, every year few of them are disappearing completely. Several individuals allege that it is beneficial for some reasons, whereas opposers argue this, as a deterioration of a society. Although single language community seem advantageous, I firmly believe that dying out of language damages society.
To begin with, it is believed that disapperance of languages is due to the globalisation of the population and came by a need of undeveloped or developing societies to practice the national language of already developed countries to stay on track. This trend is not a serious threat, as vanishing is a consequence of business interactions or diplomatic negotiations among nations. Moreover, the language is not used anymore if it does not matter anything global or there are only several people, by whom this minor language is spoken. Thus, modernization is a natural trend, which can not be prevented and the the prominent languages seem to prevail others and be a good aid for folks to build relationships.
On the other hand, myriad number of languages illustrates the uniqueness of the cultures. Undoubtedly, it is necessary for every culture to maintain the diversity, as they represent the identity of the corresponding culture in a nation or tribe.History, ethnicity, myths of certain civilizations are written on the trivial languages, so if they die out we may lose the whole culture. Without learning specific language, which will finally vanish, some cultures that are key features of a mankind, may be forgotten by ourselves. Thus, if the languages die out, traditions and cultures will inevitably perish.
In conclusion, I agree that fewer languages would ease the life of the population, however, we should maintain other trivial languages as well, for their contribution to the variety of nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24262295082 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15232900851 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5872376343 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312003936182 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108658836616 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450952848911 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178317914577 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337623177796 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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