Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that they should prefer vegetables rather than meats for their regular meals in order to ensure their health. While this trend brings some benefits, I would argue that it is healthier for humans to balance their diet with both vegetables and meats.
On the one hand, eating plant-based food is advantageous to some extent. Firstly, vegetarian diet is likely to help people to have lower risk of developing chronic diseases such as obesity, diabetes, heart diseases and some forms of cancer. This is due to the fact that unlike meats, plant foods are typically low in fat and high in fiber which are easier for human stomach to digest and do not provide excessive energy for them. Secondly, being vegetarian also properly gives people adequate nutrition. For example, raw spinach is a great source of vitamins such as vitamin A, K, and E, hence, instead of eating some many kind of foods to obtain these nutrients, people just need to eat a bowl of spinach for their whole day.
On the other hand, I believe that consuming meats is also healthy for human-being for some reasons. The principle one is that were children not to eat meat, they would suffer from a lack of protein to meet their energy needs. As the result, they would be sick or not be in the peak condition to take part in outdoor activities or pay attention to their studies. Another factor that should be taken into account is that traditional Vietnamese cooking is not suitable for vegetarianism. Instead of being stir-fried or steamed, foods are often boiled or deep-fried that may lose some nutrients of food, therefore, people should change their way of cooking or adopt non-vegetarian food.
In conclusion, although vegetarian diet is beneficial in some ways, it seems to me that meats are still of importance of people’s life so that it is necessary to eat both meats and vegetable so as to have good health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many kinds
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...cessary to eat both meats and vegetable so as to have good health.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd vegetable so as to have good health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84146341463 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57207235834 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7739624009 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175120653261 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610673058801 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330439396521 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109915908059 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027253285579 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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