Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, the problem whether students should stay at school until the age of 18 has attracted a great deal of media attention due to its impacts on youngsters’ careers. While this is beneficial to some extent, i believe that it should be not compulsory for all students to go to school until 18.
On the one hand, maintaining students at school until 18 has some advantages. Firstly, high school can provide a sufficient education and preparation for children to pursue higher education. As the cut-throat market requires candidates to have high skill levels so that it is necessary for young people to gain educational qualifications if they really want to have job prospects and move up the career ladder. Secondly, educational environment is the safest one for adolescents who are not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong. If juveniles expose themselves to the real life at early age, they can be easily lured into social temptation and illegal problems such as drug dealing, gambling and stealing which can ruin their bright future.
On the other hand, i believe that education until 18 is not compulsory for all teenagers. The first one is that there are some occupations which don’t require high school diploma such as electricians, mechanics, hair designers and so forth. Therefore, instead of gaining higher qualification, taking part in some vocational courses would be better for youngsters to learn actual experience and strenuous training. In addition, family background is an important factor to be taken into consideration because not all families families can afford for children to stay at school until they are 18. Alternatively, young people can enter work force to make ends meet and reduce financial burden on their families.
In conclusion, while schooling is useful for almost students, it seems to me that young people shouldn’t be under compulsion to continue school until the age of 18.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22784810127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96005695715 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8557508931 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211576016879 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862590590491 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847018654382 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156256777654 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772733321236 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.