Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages?
In decades, guaranteed health life is of vital importance in our society. While people think that health service shouldn’t be controlled by privately operated medical companies, I would argue that there are more advantages for people to use private health services.
On the one hand, private hospitals have their own negative impacts. Firstly, because the government couldn’t set a restriction on prices in private health institutions, they would be able to set high fees on their services such as prescription charges and high-tech machines in the operating theatre. As the result, this may discriminate significantly against those who have low or modest income as they cannot afford the costs of care or treatment. Secondly, the ultimate aim of private – run medical services is to gain profits so that they pay much more attention to the quantity rather than the quality of services. For example, in some private clinics, there are fewer experienced and qualified medical practitioners as advertised, hence, they don’t come up to the patients’ expectations.
On the other hand, there are some reasons why citizens should go to private health institutions for medical services. The first one is that privately-owned hospitals provide faster services, compared to public ones, so there is no need for patients to wait in the long line. Consequently, it would be less time consuming for either patients with life-threatening diseases or those coming for regular check-up to get treatment. In addition, it is easier for people to get access to private services rather than state-owned services in remote areas. For instance, there are more and more private health institutions built mountainous areas which provide a good opportunity for patients to have improved health care, especially those from minority group.
In conclusion, despite drawbacks being provided by profit – making cooperations, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and people should have medical services in private hospitals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50949367089 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08962391195 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2560031484 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344910907882 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120283368188 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988335833569 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239113624221 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761545074365 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.