Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Leading-edge technology leads scientists to think that cars will be controlled by computers sooner or later. Despite some drawbacks, I would argue that the benefits it could bring overshadow its disadvantages.
There are some reasons why it is possible for people to use computer-driven cars. Firstly, thanks to advances in technology, people are able to innovate cars which are controlled by computers. In addition, these cars would have navigating system connecting to satellite which allows human being to easily choose appropriate routes that avoid traffic jam and speed up journey time. Secondly, people often depend on their emotion while driving such as anxiety and being intoxicated which could put a threat to their life. Therefore, it is reasonable for human to use self-driving cars which help them to get rid of life-threating situations.
It is undeniable that driverless cars have both advantages and disadvantages, I believe that life would be much more convenient with the appearance of artificial intelligence. On the one hand, cars driven by computers are not helpful in some emergency circumstances. For example, if people want to take patient to the hospital as fast as possible but speed is limited by computers because they are programmed to adhere to law in order to guarantee safety ground. On the other hand, computerized cars are suitable for people who have physical disability or mental health problems. If the elderly could use cars without others’ supervision, they would live more independently and reduce a burden for their family members whenever they want to visit their friends or their relatives by their own.
All things considered, it is likely for people to use driverless cars in the future. Moreover, it seems to me that the benefits would outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...ich allows human being to easily choose appropriate routes that avoid traffic jam and speed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31487889273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05230324802 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0422137601 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131155961271 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506134566048 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480325717105 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835090799265 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393581206332 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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