explain merits and demerits of living in media rich soceity.
Nowadays, we have been bombarded with an array of news from media whether it is electronic media and social media. The media had made great strides with the help of advance technology. In the techno savvy world, media has glamourised the people living standards. People are clutched into the chains of media which has both pros and cons. Selfcentredness and less socialization are some of the impacts of media which are dispensed below.
To commence with, selfcenterdness is prevailing among masses due to the indulgence in media. Socialization is limited. People are more encouraged for non verbal communication in relative to face to face communication.The upsurge of social media and electronic media has led people to become couch potatoes. The tradition of playing in the public parks and gardens is taken away by social applications like Facebook, Instagram and twitter. Apart from this, sedentary lifestyle is the result of media rich society which eventually leads to worst health conditions and mentally illness. As its is not enough, media has snatched the privacy of celebrities and famous people. Right for freedom for them is considered needless.
On the other side, the daily routine is encountered myriad benefits of media. The print media like newspaper helps people to bound up their knowledge. It is an asset to keep themselves up to date. Moreover, the grocery items, food and clothing are delivered on the doorstep by using the social media applications like swiggy, zomato and flipkart which lessen the burden of housewives. Furthermore, in today's 4g era, media has brought people from native countries come closer. One can have a talk with ones near and dear ones in the friction of seconds. Hence, media has developed as a boon for the masses.
Suffice to say, usage of media is depends upon people. According to my perspective, the merits outweigh the drawbacks. It totally relied on us whether we have to take it as a boon or a bane.
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84360690929 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588588588589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6840841976 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9565217391 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4782608696 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4347826087 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208468029081 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570475692449 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444448206135 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101193070656 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609504932603 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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