Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is undoubtedly true that participate in a sports game is synonymous with potentially taking injuries since all sports involve some element of risk. Nonetheless, there are certain sports such as sky diving or skiing which often be considered as extremely hazardous and, therefore, should be prohibited for people's sake. From my perspective, I find no justification to support the idea of banning adventurous sports
To initiate, there is a variety of advantageous impacts that extreme sporting activities can bring. One fundamental benefit of these extreme sports is that they can foster toughness as well as self-esteem deep inside a person. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that whenever people went through a challenge which ostensibly insurmountable, they are fulfilled by the sense of confidence as they just get over themselves. Another advantage of extreme sports that is worth considering is that it enhances plenty of vital abilities. An illustration of this is hand-eye coordination skill, which can be achieved through mastering the sky-diving or skiing equipment. There seems to be evidence that the perfect collaboration between these organs will allegedly make a great contribution to dealing with the multitasking in daily life.
Furthermore, the risk of being injured while participating in these adventurous games are able to be averted by using protective gears and training to play properly. It is irrefutable that compulsory classes about controlling as well as preserving these protecting equipment is taking place on a regular basis in the sites organised extreme sports. Additionally, if a person has the desire to enrol in an adventurous sporting activity, undergo short-term training about regulations and safety procedures to reduce the possibility of accidents will be the prerequisite. Consequently, as long as participants follow the instruction and use essential protective equipment, the damages or mortalities scarcely ever happen
Due to all the aforementioned explanations, one could draw a conclusion that extreme sports should not be banned because of the beneficial impacts they bring as well as all the potential damages can be prevented using protective gears
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: skydiving
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Message: Did you mean 'playing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: playing
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56213017751 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26912233079 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7864549813 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240438463706 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087809063151 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677881161667 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153319386673 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709086604044 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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