Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Many people have an opinion that extreme sports are very dangerous therefore government should ban these sports. I completely disagree with this point of view. Extreme sports are kind of entertainment and not so dangerous so people have the right to choose them for their leisure time.
From my point of view, extreme sports is not as dangerous as many people think. Every sport has its own regulation, procedures and safety measures that we must comply with. Particularly when people start playing extreme sports, they always need to take training courses with experienced trainers. People only entitle to play risky sports when they meet all criterions. This preparation guarantees that people can enjoy without any dangerous. Besides, the improving of protective equipment and technology in modern time ensures your safety at the highest level.
Because of those above reason, I completely believe that it would be wrong to ban extreme sports. Every person has different hobbies. There is someone like the feeling of adventure or want to challenge their capacity limit so they choose extreme sports. It is their rights to decide what they can enjoy in leisure time. No one can force them to change their hobbies. Furthermore, it is impossible to ban those kinds of sports. Many risky sports take place at remote area, therefore it is hard for authority to control. Authority cannot arrange enough police force to keep watching every possible place that those sports can happen. It is kind of odd thing to spend resource and waste a lot of money on banning extreme sports.
In conclusion, banning extreme sports is not necessary while we can handle to diminish risk by focusing on training or improving safety measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12367491166 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52999091893 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 30.1563791297 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3157894737 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188555598497 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613972137826 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630139719878 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125375590039 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072889046749 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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