It is opined by a minority of people that sports such as skydiving and skiing shall be banned as it is very harmful for individuals. I disagree with this notion and in this essay I will highlight the reasons to substantiate the same.
On the one hand, there are a plethora of reasons that these sports should not be banned. First and Foremost, this kind of sports are stress busters. To explicate it, in this contemporary era, enormous individuals are working due to the hectic schedule they do not get time for themselves and become moody. To exemplify, according to the report 90% of people having mental issues for taking too much pressure from work. Therefore, these sky diving and skiing sports for best for human beings to relives from stress and have quality time with their loved ones.
Furthermore, numerous institutes are available which provide training to persons that how to do sky vault and skiing. Also, provide safety equipment's which help them to learn these sports effectively.
On the flip hand, there is few factor to ban these types of adventures. A predominant reason is it leads to human death. In other words, there are a number of teenagers who try these types of activity just for fun without any experience. Due to which they do not perfect and face a number of issues. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2016 has revealed that 70% of adults were injured by trying sky drop and skiing for the first time. As a result, if persons do not take learning classes before performing these sports then they lose their lives.
To recapitulate, I believe that sky fall and skiing are the best sports to have fun with family and friends and also to relive from pressure and it should not be banned. However, there are some drawbacks to these activities which should not be ignored by people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...ch pressure from work. Therefore, these sky diving and skiing sports for best for human be...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'few factors'.
Suggestion: few factors
...ectively. On the flip hand, there is few factor to ban these types of adventures. A pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7445482866 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49615342512 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2889211861 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264360943859 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809658651435 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646536294897 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157650050273 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776550694 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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