With the advance of technology, education plays an important role in people's lives. As we see nowadays more and more people are being obsessed with education of their children. They want their children to receive the best education as possible in order to make it available for them to keep up with the demand of society. so they would prefer non government schools to public schools to make sure their children are well educated. To make this happen, they have to pay a huge amount of money not only for private school but also for tax imposed on public school as well. I'm of opinion that people are required to pay tax for services provided by the government whether they take or not. the reasons regarding the topic are stated shortly.
First, public school is advantageous for children from low income families. Those whose parents don't have such affordability to pay for private institutions can gain education as well. without both government and tax payers 'support, these children remain education less and this afflict society as whole. they may end up being criminal that provide threat to the community.
people living in poor quality environment, for instance, have less or no money at all to provide their children with education required. the same is true for children from large families.
Second, development of society pretty much depends on nationwide education for everyone. To make sure this happens, government shouldn't exempt affluent citizens from tax even if they don't apply this government provided service. The money received should be spent on education and education alone.
To sum up, it is up to all of us to support the government by paying our taxes and expect the government to do the same by providing services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98293515358 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58111654801 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3538792487 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226306989649 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755962474103 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498032656256 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13455087794 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420571110196 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.