Modern technology has brought many benefits to the betterment of our lives but like many other innovations it’s not devoid of any drawbacks as well. The coexistence of both computer and internet are considered as the greatest advance of human discovery that make the life of human not only easy but also modernized. So many jobs today, which need well skilled and quite knowledgeable individuals in this field, are computerized. This makes the job done faster and with fewer errors in the process. The positions, which used to be carried out by human workforce and the ones done by hands, are far gone. The following reasons assert my opinion regarding the matter.
To begin with. With the invention of computer, it seems to be natural that some jobs take their place to newly developed professions. Many people, who used to do some simple tasks around the office or town, are left unemployed because computers were programmed to do the same job with moderate ease. Occupations such as postman, bank teller, phone operator, etc. no longer exist.
Secondly, computer can be disadvantageous in some aspects. As we entered the modern era, we have lost human touch due to this newly invented device which is in exponential growth ever since. Many invented social Medias cause a decline in human interaction as well. Conversation and chit chat between people fall short and be mostly carried out on the phone. This appears to be a drop in face to face communication.
Overall, we cannot ignore the very benefit of computer as it paves the way for many difficulties we have been through before from counting, entering the log, arranging flights, monitoring staff and the list goes on and on. I think people from all walks of life should never stop preparing yourself for the demands of the world or be updated by it and not to rely on monotonous job for the rest of their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84472049689 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.656033092 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624223602484 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6194792638 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117181025031 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333676445632 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333883763864 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686250747336 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155287490544 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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