some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a controversy surrounding whether women should be entitled to serve in military or not. Although women have substantiated their ability both physically and mentally in different sectors as doctor, teacher, leader, they are fragile, soft hearted, caring people who cannot put up with the harshness of battlefield in compare to their male counterparts whose nature makes it easy for them to pass over the bloodshed and hardships of war. In spite of all these, I think this should be a matter of choice to let women to decide how much they can find themselves capable in handling the job.
To begin with. Gender equality, which has been the subject of many discussions these days, is mostly around women competency. To whom don’t want to acknowledge this, Physical and mental ability of women can be more developed by training and exercise therefore they can be as strong as men. It is also considered essential to be trained to fight back when their lives and country are in jeopardy. So they can defense and support the country when the war breaks out. Due to implausible bigotry, it is totally unfair to refute them from their civil rights.
In other words, working in military may not be a well suited job for women because it cannot be expected from women to kill someone or can function properly around blood. They should be inducted the jobs in military organizations. However, they can deal with the difficulty of working in such atmosphere, we should accept the fact that their gentle soul is very fragile and may not last long as men do.
Overall, to serve better, everyone should be given a choice regardless of their gender to decide according to competence and cognitive power.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (3 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, i think, in other words, in spite of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86551724138 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61387726186 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8036521252 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14614831494 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525086953518 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389710432748 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910620023235 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255381274728 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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