Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is commonly believed that parents whose children receive a private education do not need to pay taxes for the state education system. However, I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it would be wrong to allow families with children attending private school not to pay taxes. To embark on, a majority of people opt to pay huge amounts of taxes for public services that they hardly ever use during their lifetime. For instance, many people are willing to pay for medical insurance and public transport, but they do not seem to use these services on a regular basis. Nevertheless, the money from taxation may have a significantly crucial in improving the national healthcare system or upgrading and erecting further transport infrastructure. Therefore, although some children do not study in public schools, their parents are still encouraged to pay taxes as that money could be allocated to fund the country’s education system.
Further and even more importantly, though, if the aforementioned parents still had to pay taxes, it would have considerably beneficial effects on the entire country. This is because many institutions will not suffer from financial shortage and thus be able to function properly, which means that all members of society (especially underprivileged children) can have a high-quality education system. This will result in a well-educated, skilled workforce, and in turn a prosperous nation with sustainable development.
By way of conclusion, I do not believe that any tax rebate should be made for children who choose private education.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29249011858 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03583558648 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3597241196 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342503884119 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127968814914 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877365541863 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219076630863 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744485663683 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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