Famous actors and some professional sports people can command a very high salary. Some people think that this is fair because salaries should be based on people’s gifts and talents. Others, however, believe that a person’s salary should be based on their contribution to society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is true that whether it is fair or unfair for the income of celebrities or several athletes is a subject of debate. While reasons can be given to justify the latter, the former is much more preferable.
On the one hand, there are compelling reasons to think that the salary of well-known people and sports experts is unfair for other trades. Firstly, celebrities are not regarded as residents contributing to their society as their jobs seem not to have a direct influence on their community. In the era of global concerns such as environment or trade wars, the jobs towards entertainment purposes are not highly appreciated. Secondly, there are several professional sportsmen who are easily lured to be using doping in competition, and this does no good for people’s point of view. Finally, the more famous influencers are, the more attention their mistakes draw from the community, hence they could be assessed more rigorously. For example, only when the faults are made from celebrities, will they go viral rather than from normal residents.
On the other hand, others would argue that these occupations deserve to require an incredibly decent income. The prominent justification is that celebrities bring about lots of inspiration for society, especially for the young generations. It is undeniable that the youngsters are likely to pay attention to influencers that enhance the youth’s admiration. Furthermore, there are also a lot of professional sportspeople that are role models of patience and overcoming the sufferings. There is indeed a huge source of dreams and aspirations for the youth generations that comes from some athletes. Last but not least, to become a celebrity or athlete takes a lot of time and effort to deal with all the scandals that definitely could make you fail. It is indeed not easy for everyone to become a famous person or an expert in any sports. For instance, any famous people always have to learn how to accept and overcome tons of bad things although they are not the truth.
In conclusion, for the reason mentioned above, although some people do not have a good perspective of renowned people or professional athletes with respect to their salary, it seems to me that they deserve to gain decent income.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07754010695 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88582950873 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3780387354 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.705882353 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2941176471 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171165005606 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493371564951 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530828177708 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105413703283 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386523805206 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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