The fashion industry is harmful to society and the environment. Do you agree or disagree
It is an argument that the clothing industry adversely affects humanity and the environment. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement.
The fashion industry, especially fast fashion, produces an amount of harm to our lifestyle. Firstly, Fast Fashion creates a waste wave because people only use cloth items which are becoming trendy of month or year. Clothes are cheaper, therefore, they afford for fashion uncontrollably and after that, they put these products into a trash folder. Moreover, this type of fashion also has negative impacts on workers who employ in industrial factories. Employers have to interact with toxic textile dyes every day in spite of their low salaries. It is clear that for these reasons, the effects of industrial fashion are worrisome.
In addition, Fast Fashion lead to in other hand drawbacks not only to our society but also to our environment. Every season, it releases an amount of out-of-fashion items by burning instead of sharing for the poor due to some economic strategies. In the wild, terrestrial and marine creatures equally consume the poisonous dyes and microfibers discharged into streams through the food chain with disastrous results. Furthermore, a number of animals are killed for materials and the wastes of fashion make for the animal habitat disappearance.
In conclusion, although the fashion industry has generated significant economic growth in our century, its dangerous impact on our society and environment is countless. We should raise the campaign to prevent this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37551020408 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8594043528 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648979591837 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5680849399 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217723260727 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700212662845 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577132456806 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123562954208 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036910733698 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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