Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
In today’s modern society, individuals strongly concentrate on their appearance so they try to follow trendy fashion. That’s probably leads to some harmful consequences as people must pay a lot of money to clothes and are attracted by luxurious lifestyles. From my perspective, I partly agree that wearing fashionable clothing may good if you can afford the expense of clothing easily and the opposite was adverse if you can not.
A great amount of consumer worldwide promote the development of fashion industries, which is one of the factors contribute to extinction of animals. Having said that luxury fashion brands need materials from animals such as skin, fur, and so on to create unique products that shows inhumanity of clothing industrials. Besides, individuals who too focus on their exteriority, invest all their money to fashion without hesitation just want attentions and show off that they are rich. That is totally meaningless because if they waste money to fashion and do not have savings, they can not save their life when miserable situations happen like severe illness and life in retirement is definitely unstable.
On the other hand, dressing like a fashionista make everyone more confident and happy when going out. Although beautiful outfits must cost high price, shopping lovers can hunting sale or buy second hand clothes to have cheaper expenses. In addition, people need to have a reasonable way of spending money to clothes by choosing affordable fashion brands. It is obvious that beauty needs is undeniable and hard workers worth with their efforts. Furthermore, wearing well-dressed costumes also shows respect to others.
In conclusion, despite of uncontrollable spending to clothing and cruel exploitation in animals of luxury brands, I still support those people who like to wear fashionable clothes with suitable balance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to focus'?
Suggestion: to focus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36518771331 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85816564963 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645051194539 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5615320548 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181084433605 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608847653214 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505744828246 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121405519838 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400407610983 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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