In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In the modern era, healthy lifestyles are not popular to people. Having said that the majority become fatter and they do not concentrate on health and fitness anymore. To solve the problem, we must find reasons and solutions about this.
To start with, the average weight of people is creasing because of a great deal larger of carbonhydrate and sugar consumption, typically junk foods. Additionally, it is convenient to eat processed food than home making as workers are busy so they do not have enough time for food preparing. Secondly, some people in bad mood will consume more sugar than normal because they struggle with stresses and sugar can create happy hormone. Besides, less doing exercise is one of the dramatic reasons for being fat. But in some cases, people are unable to change their harmful lifestyles. For instance, the peculiarity of officers is that they sit for whole time in the office so it is hard for them to enhance their health.
In terms of following healthy lifestyles, the first step is finding suitable diets such as eat clean-that means you use slow absorbing starch like sweet potatoes and oat instead of eating fast absorbing starch that you often consume regularly. Furthermore, doing gymnastics to be more active and stay healthier. Additionally, people can find their partners to create motivations and efficiency throughout the processes.
To sum up, people do not stay healthy as the development of fast food, depressions and restriction of movements. I totally agree that trying healthy diet and applying workout are the good measures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, in some cases, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09266409266 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70331487827 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9641634979 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198531921202 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644188255849 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398476634335 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100169631237 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504853311747 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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