The fashion industry is harmful to society and the environment. Do you agree or disagree
In the modern era, the society and environment have been badly affected by the clothing industrials. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement as harmful effects that fashion industry brings to individuals.
Firstly, the fashion industry is the reason why environmental issues being worse. That means it contributes to air pollution by increasing humanity's carbon emissions. Furthermore, the clothing manufacture also harm to water sources by discharge toxic chemicals such as dyes into the rivers or streams. For example, particularly in the fast fashion due to a huge amount of consumers grow significantly which requires fashion brands create new styles and more products to respond demands. So, it definitely leads to mighty wasting products and damage the environment.
Secondly, the pragmatic and luxurious lifestyle of young people is consequence of development in fashionable trending. For more details, the young addicted to shopping and desire to be salient although they do not have stable income. This problem is really damage society if we do not find solutions.
In conclusion, I am wholeheartedly persuaded by the notion because the fashion industry cause to environmental problems and pragmatic lifestyle in youngsters.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'damaged'.
Suggestion: damaged
...e stable income. This problem is really damage society if we do not find solutions. I...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61052631579 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14610078327 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.439310616 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277203237302 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838676095959 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634833015823 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153305506588 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715076410456 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'damaged'.
Suggestion: damaged
...e stable income. This problem is really damage society if we do not find solutions. I...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61052631579 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14610078327 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.439310616 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9090909091 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277203237302 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838676095959 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634833015823 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153305506588 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715076410456 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.