Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtable that aviation industry play an important role in the development of the world. But some people argue that travelling by airplane making a large consumption in fuel and they choose to travel in the ground to save the environment and resources. From my viewpoint, the advantages of plane totally outweigh its disadvantages as great achievements that this industry have contributed.
On the one hand, air pollution have affected by a great amount of factor, typically smoke. For more details, not only air travel make the air being harmful but also the smoke from vehicles such as car, and motorbike and a big volume of cacbon dioxide from industrial companies. Because of that, reducing air travel can not solve the air problem effectively than using public transportations. For instance, Viet Nam is one of the developing countries that have the number of motorbiker which are crowdest due to less using public means of transport.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that travelling is the backbone of the economic in some countries, both developing countries and developed countries. So, if we restrict the air travel, the income of those depend on tourist is no longer stable. Furthermore, it also help to introduce national identities to international friends by exchanging cultures. Besides, some goods are forced to deliver by airline because of the storage, date of use, etc. For example, patients are in the critical situation need viscera from a volunteer live in a far away country. In this case, the transport that has the fastest rate like plane is the first priority to save life. In contrast, if the air travel is restricted, it may the same that the country close the boarder and lead to relating serious consequences.
In conclusion, although some individuals have the thought to make a breakdown of the air travelling because of the bad effect to place where they live. I still support the growth of aviation industry as it is more beneficial in the long run.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... no longer stable. Furthermore, it also help to introduce national identities to int...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d to relating serious consequences. In conclusion, although some individuals h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00299401198 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88216382243 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1661415125 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210592585928 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618461921828 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053000236086 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118784138785 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218936746728 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... no longer stable. Furthermore, it also help to introduce national identities to int...
^^^^
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d to relating serious consequences. In conclusion, although some individuals h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00299401198 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88216382243 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1661415125 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210592585928 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618461921828 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053000236086 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118784138785 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218936746728 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.