Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are
solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they
are also responsible for bringing the children up
Paternal right is a problem of controversy. Some people think maternal right must be emphasised more than paternal right while others claim other opposite things. Standing for fatherhood must be taken seriously. From my viewpoint, it is more than just an opinion: several researches demonstrate this outcome. In the past era, mothers were housewife and fathers work out which lead to mother had more active role in nurturing kids but today both of them are working.
A study done by a researcher concluded that parent, together are responsible for bringing the children up. Children learn from both of them and it will be exceedingly hard to choose one of them. Also, it should be noted that kids who raised up by their parent, mother and father both have better out come in the community, school and their future and being well brought up. For instance, my friend’s parent are divorced and she lives with his mother. As I can observe, sometimes she really need her father guide in her emotional which lack of her father given rise to some problem.
In short, I believe that child must be nurtured by both of his parent and not ignore father’s role in kid’s life. I t give me the sense that giving a birth to kid is not adequate to give authority to mother in deciding whether have a babies or not. I n some cases, father play more active role in bringing up a child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: outcome
...ent, mother and father both have better out come in the community, school and their futu...
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Suggestion:
...e community, school and their future and being well brought up. For instance, my ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a baby' or simply 'babies'?
Suggestion: a baby; babies
...rity to mother in deciding whether have a babies or not. I n some cases, father play mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, while, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68442622951 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54046464822 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618852459016 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7110369107 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181132818024 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665129116223 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693840903144 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114128841751 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417013005192 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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