Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?
Movie stars and singers gain adequate amount of money and they have live a glamorous and cozy life.However,most of them live displeased life.I am agree with this statement.
To began with,actors and singers are live very luxurious life,Because they involve with media,with cinema,advertisement.They have to trouble many countries in the world for their shooting purpose.They not only income a great deal of money but also they achive huge publicity.They became like a star which is untouchable,precious.They have not any lackings in their life.In addition,theyl become rewoned all around of the world.Actors and singers can earn huge amount of money from their profession because of their popularity.It seems from outside that" how much happy they are!"
Despite they have luxurious life most of them are unhappy in their life.I strongly belive that only money never can bring happiness in a persons life.We think that a media person's life is very cozy and they have a great deal of money.But we cannot see that how much they have struggled in their life to reach their position.They have no personal life,every step or every moment of their life is published in newspaper or social media.They have no time for themselves,because of their work.They have to do a lot of struggle to intercept their position,also have to tolerate many kinds of troublee.They couldnot live like a unstrained life.
In conclusion,I think become a celebraty is not so easy.It looks like so glamorous.However, their life is full of misery and drawback.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27235772358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58512848799 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.2975951904 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 507.468444558 49.4020404114 1027% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 432.333333333 106.682146367 405% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.0 20.7667163134 395% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18289633913 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123290063944 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889380224472 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123000208692 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766826942436 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.4 13.0946893788 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.21 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 11.3001002004 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.1190380762 344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hey have live a glamorous and cozy life.However,most of them live displeased life.I am ...
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...e live a glamorous and cozy life.However,most of them live displeased life.I am agree...
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...wever,most of them live displeased life.I am agree with this statement. To began...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27235772358 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58512848799 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.2975951904 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 507.468444558 49.4020404114 1027% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 432.333333333 106.682146367 405% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.0 20.7667163134 395% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18289633913 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123290063944 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889380224472 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123000208692 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766826942436 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.4 13.0946893788 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.21 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 11.3001002004 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.1190380762 344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.