Education has been vitally importance for human beings in their entire lifetime. It is often argued that it is compulsory for students to subject to education of financial and economic aspects. In my view, I partially agree with that and I believe students should be imparted certain basic knowledge about the money and finance.
It is essential for every educational institute to instruct the value of money to every pupil. Imparting the students basic knowledge and common sense about the finance could cultivate students' decent concept about proper utilization of the money and raise their awareness of the importance of saving the money. A case in point is that many students in Taiwan who born with silver spoon are not conscious about the importance of saving money. They often spend their money in an extravagant way, which leads to shortage of money and massive waste of expenditure on unnecessary things. As a result, it is pivotal that every institution should educate their students with right perceptive about utilizing the money.
Even though it is important to implement financial education at school, certain approach and strategy of finance and economic are inadequate for students to acquire as those practice is risky for every individual. To demonstrate, stock investment is extremely hazardous when engaging in. People who invest their money in stock market often underwent grave consequence eventually. Hence, financial education should not encompass some risky approach to gain profit.
All in all, as argued above, I am convinced that education of finance is surely essential to students. However, some strategy and unacceptable way should be restricted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an extravagant way" with adverb for "extravagant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing money. They often spend their money in an extravagant way, which leads to shortage of money and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36603773585 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76619474959 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2826159373 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141012609705 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592029229478 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485701716181 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103000432512 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454690004238 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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