The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Over the past decades, four-wheel vehicle known as car has been playing a pivotal role in human life especially nowadays. Car made it first appearance at the United Kingdom in the year 1888. A couple years later in 2000, it was believed that up to 29 million vehicles were driven on the street in Britain. Other types of transportation are expected to be encouraged by some individuals, moreover, they supposed that international regulations should be taken into account the usage and ownership of car. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement given because there are several reasons for people not to own a car, such as poverty and there are also problems occurred from using car.
On one hand, car has brought plenty benefits to humanity such as a convenience of travelling, and a useful personal area inside. To be specific, people nowadays are living in the globalizing world with full-speed move. Owning a car provides a person choices and opportunities to go as far as they wish. For instance, when someone planned for a trip in faraway tourist attraction which requires a long journey, it is better to spend time on his own units and follow his own pace. A personal car could afford these conditions for its owner. Consequently, car is a useful innovation for human.
On the other hand, owning vehicles brings a load of expense to the owner, and causes many unfavorable conditions to others as well. First, to have a personal car, individual will have to collect an enough amount of money to buy one, and another amount of money for its reparation. Driving thousand miles definitely leads to mechanical problem with the motor inside. Second, driving car under national laws with crowded numbers of cars and other transports contribute to problems on road, if someone does not follow the rules which it is obvious during rush hours in present.
As a consequence, I think other alternative forms of transport should now be promoted to country's citizen since it brings more options to them for owning a vehicle. A Motorcycle seems to be a great alternative for people with less budget or in remote area because it is lower in price and adjustable for driving in unorganized road. Moreover, international laws should be introduced to control how people use and own a car as, while other vehicles shall follow the same regulation as well. These will make it easier for the authorities to govern the traffic in the territory.
In conclusion, I believed that global and also Britain regulations should be used with automobile usage control with the similar level for all other kinds and alternative transports need to be encouraged by the authorities to provide a wider range of options for people to own one, because there might be some reasons like poverty that prevents oneself from having a personal car. Also, as I have mentioned earlier, there shall be a noticeable change for such a situation like accident caused by cars.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 500.0 315.596192385 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74947558636 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 788.4 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.313325329 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.761904762 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8095238095 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314478928945 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939025483186 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070217207913 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18588818314 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767178944677 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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