The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Since the first car appeared on British roads near the end of the 19th century, the number of vehicles has skyrocketed during the next two centuries with over 29 million cars. Hence, measures have been examined to reduce the number of private car owners, such as encouraging the use of other transports and introducing global legislation. In my opinion, I agree that these are the two best remedies to minimize car ownership.
To begin with, alternative transports would reduce carbon dioxide emissions. In this regard, public transportation should be taken into account to produce a more eco-friendly society for citizens. To illustrate this, if more than a half number of commuters were asked to use the public transportation system, then a half number of vehicles would not show up on the streets, and the air would be much fresher. Moreover, governments could further allocate financial resources into developing systems using renewable energy and consequently reduce the amount of gasoline usage.
Next, imposing higher taxes would discourage car purchasing. Due to the help of financial institutions, people usually have no trouble filling out the form of lending loans for buying a car. However, by raising the taxes on cars, people would be discouraged from buying and using the vehicles and consequently public transports would be a valid alternative. For instance, in Spain, car taxes are so high that more than half of the daily commuters choose the train, bus, or subway rather than their cars.
Admittedly, private cars are prioritized because of their convenience. It is not uncommon that people would unconsciously use their vehicles for certain occasions like going to the markets or picking their children from school. However, if governments tried hard enough to provide a more reliable transportation system at a low price, people would consider public transports as a more economical alternative and prefer using them as a result.
To recapitulate, I agree that the encouragement of using public transport and the introduction of legislation would trump car ownership. Commuters would acknowledge public transports as a valid candidate for daily travel when the taxes for cars are not affordable. In the future, I believe that the environmental problems would be lessened as a result of these measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28918918919 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9803458945 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5461542851 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.117647059 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255660550418 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846371128297 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052713118347 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148596771187 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641636103045 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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