Some people believe that it is best to accept aa bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
During a human's lifespan, there would be several times when humans encounter unwanted situations like getting an undesirable job or being lack of money. Although some people would accept these situations, others would try to overcome such events. The following essay will examine these two standpoints and explain why people should take either action depending on the situation.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that many fresh graduates could not find a job that they had spent four years studying in college. As a result, they would end up doing something that is not their expertise, such as being a temporary shipper or Grab-driver. Or else, they would luckily get a job that somehow relates to their career choice, but they have no interest at first. In this regard, people would understand that they have no options but accept the circumstances; however, they would also acknowledge such situations as a motivation for them to try harder in the future.
On the other hand, people would find many possible ways to counter unfortunate situations because they believe that they would lose everything once they stop trying. To put this differently, when people are struggling with money, they could not simply accept the reality, but they would choose to work overtime or even get another part-time job, especially those who have a family. This collective behavior would push these people to go beyond their limits and overcome those bad situations consequently. To illustrate this point, I remember that my dad used to work extra to earn enough money for my asthma treatment, which was quite expensive in a developing city like my hometown at that time. Hence, it is apparent that if people could use all their potential, they might change the hardships.
In conclusion, I believe that it is either right or wrong to decide whether to accept or improve bad situations, but we should take action depending on the circumstances as long as we do not give up on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97590361446 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65302463256 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9699591335 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202956465517 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795240101903 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056037872845 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132427092689 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438296978755 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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