The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the issue of alternative forms of vehicles for cars is of current interest because the level of population is growing sharply what causes the increase of the transport using. There is about 29 million cars was made in Britain since 1888. But today people started to think abour forbidding cars and introducing non-motorized vehicles like rickshaws. Personally, I partly agree with the idea that alternative forms of transport should be used and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use because the amount of using cars affects people in a hasty manner but they cannot be forbidden.
From the one side, cars are very convenient in use. Firstly, one can get to the place faster and with bigger comfort rather than on underground railway or by bike. Secondly, sometimes the price for car supplies is more reasonable than permanent using of, for example, taxi because frequent travelling on long distances with taxi driver usually costs more.
From another side, using this kind of vehicle has many disadvantages. First of all, it is the emission of gases and, as a result, air pollution. There are many environmentally friendly transports but most of them are not as convenient as cars. For example, bike and rollers are useful for person's health but mostly it takes a great deal more time to get to the place. What is more, in many countries there are no roads for bikes, so people put their health in risk. In addition, there is traffic jams due to the amount of vehicles. Sometimes ones cannot get on their work in time even getting by car because of this people become stressful and disappointed.
Finally, I believe that there should be used fewer cars to save the planet and their health. Nevertheless, they cannot be forbidden or encouraged by the international laws because cars are very comfortable and save a lot of our time. So, it only depends on humanity whether they will change their way of using transport or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a hasty manner" with adverb for "hasty"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the amount of using cars affects people in a hasty manner but they cannot be forbidden. From the...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... in time even getting by car because of this people become stressful and disappointe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69951764277 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7351519912 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327804824447 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962026587406 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849215546747 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192849596702 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122832108351 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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