It has been repeatedly contended that people from abroad are required to be charged more than the locals for visit to tourist sites. I intend to use this essay to elucidate on this argument; foreigners should part with more funds than the natives when they come to these places of interests.
Firstly, aliens are known to usually plan well ahead for their trips and saved up for such, hence, they have a readily disposable cash to access these sites, though their visit may be educational, on the other hand, it is majorly for the leisure side of things, hence the host lands of the sites should key into that to shore up their influx of foreigners' funds. While comparing these to the indigenous persons, whose visits are largely a spur of the moment decision to educate their children and relax also.
Secondly, from the economic perspectives as well, most of these sites are maintained by the taxes paid by the citizens of the hosts, so, making them to pay as much as the foreign visitors, amounts to double jeopardy and it will further erode the purchasing power of these people and as such discourage such activities that may have encouraged them to learn more about their history and culture as a race.
Furthermore, locals, will be discouraged at such activities, and that will go a long way to affect the revenue of these sites, take for instance, the situation of the games reserves in Nigeria, their low patronage is due to the prohibitive costs of visit because, converting from the foreign currencies the prices are denominated, pushes them off.
On the whole, I strongly that local citizens are encouraged to visit these venues by allowing them pay less than the visitors from yonder. this will encourage patronage and increase funds for development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ion to educate their children and relax also. Secondly, from the economic pers...
Line 6, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...hasing power of these people and as such discourage such activities that may have...
Line 10, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...pay less than the visitors from yonder. this will encourage patronage and increase f...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89072847682 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52910126925 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.692234756 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.625 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180639265531 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880961833968 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568928209619 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108947825084 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07175430296 0.056905535591 126% => OK
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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