In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The above prompt states that the sales of newspapers or books will reduce dramatically and nobody will buy them in near future as it will be available online where it will be free of cost. I strongly agree with this statement and the reasons for which I will be discussing in this essay.

Firstly, technology is advancing at an exponential rate in every aspect. Technology is omnipresent, and has become an arrant necessity to survive in today’s world. Especially during this lockdown time, when people are required to be ostracized to keep themselves safe, the e-commerce websites have become ubiquitous since it is more accessible and easier to operate. Another vivid example is, in schools and colleges, the reference material for a particular subject is uploaded online and students are expected and recommended to study and give exams online using a laptop. At this rate, there will be no need to print the textbooks for schools or universities.

Secondly, technology is gradually taking over print media. For instance, the most popular TV News channels like the NDTV, CNN, BBC, they have their own websites, blogs, pages on social media and applications where the newsfeed is available to the people 24/7 and are just a few clicks away. The famous magazines like The New Yorker, Scientific American, the Economist, etc., also follow the same strategy as it draws more people to read their magazines.

Lastly, there are a variegated advantages of reading online than offline. To name a few, online reading is more accessible, portable and free of cost. Books on the other hand are heavy and cannot be carried around all the time, it is not economical, financially and environmentally. On an average, at least 20 trees are cut down to make one ton of paper. In my opinion this is extravagantly wasteful because today we have tabs and amazon kindles, laptops, phones and other gadgets to read anything and everything we want and it is unnecessary to harm the environment.

In conclusion, although books give us a good feel overall, technology trumps it and circumvents all the limitations of reading through books. Hence, I believe that in future, technology will overtake print media.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...nes. Lastly, there are a variegated advantages of reading online than offline. To name...
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ng through books. Hence, I believe that in future, technology will overtake print media. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06318681319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81917262175 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6173445286 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281323034561 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737108286416 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818296083171 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140128952858 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114538868155 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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