In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
From the primitive stone tools at the cradle of civilization, humankind has come far. Since the inception of modern technology, online reading has evolved and gradually replaced printed newspapers or books due to its free access. From my personal point of view, I firmly disagree with this statement and believe that traditional reading has its own meanings as ever.
To begin with, since the advent of digital reading, at first, people find it enthralling and cost-effective. however, the favour does not last long as they discover its drawbacks. Reading long-form texts through the screen may cause eye strain and dizziness and far more physical issues. As a matter of fact, many turn back to print reading instead due to its comfortable impacts on health. Conventional reading also helps people to pay more concentration and activate their brain better as there are no disturbing notifications appearing during the reading process. As a result, a more facile way helps people in order to understand the morals of the books better. For instance, a student can pay more attention to reading if there are no disruptions, namely Facebook or Instagram notifications, and thus it can boost their knowledge acquisition pace.
Otherwise, the appearance of vintage lifestyles makes people get interested in conventional activities such as reading printed newspapers or thrifting clothes. As the vintage community expands, there are a majority of participants across the globe. they may find this trend is just fascinating at first, however, over time it becomes a healthy lifestyle for everyone. Therefore, achieving print reading not just assists people in knowledge enhancement but also provides positive aspects to individuals. For instance, take an elder in comparison with a teenager who frequently uses digital reading methods, the elder may have better eyes’ strength and faster literacy skills.
To conclude, even though online reading can reduce the cost, I strongly believe that reading by printed newspaper or books can help people to develop their physical and spiritual health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...find it enthralling and cost-effective. however, the favour does not last long as they ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
... vintage community expands, there are a majority of participants across the globe. they ...
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Suggestion: They
...ority of participants across the globe. they may find this trend is just fascinating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42813455657 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88541793115 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.702350061 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177664550717 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557667094605 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384389999041 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11638703034 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193400830915 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.