In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people assume that reading online is more convenience and economical than reading on newspapers. I find myself in complete disagreement with this viewpoint because of the huge advantages from newspapers.

There are various reasons why people prefer newspapers than others kind of reading devices. Firstly, reading newspaper has become a part of reading culture. Many people still buy newspapers or magazines on morning daily as it is their habit. Secondly, the structure of newspapers seems to be easy to understand and logically. Readers can summarize the news that they want to concentrate on. For example, the first page of a newspaper is often about breaking news or current affairs from over the world, and people can find the information needed without read all of them.

The preference of newspaper caused by the long-lasting information that readers could remember inside their mind. According to scientists from Cambridge university, reading books, newspapers or printed publications brings an enormous benefit to our memory system. It is undeniable that reading printed products helps people expand their memory and avoid them from others diseases such as eye-sighted, backache, headache, and so on.

In conclusion, It is my opinion that reading newspapers or books cannot be replaced by reading online for its irreplaceable value in our culture and the potential advantages.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49074074074 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89381109632 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4234530385 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200473824384 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749479119697 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290324625107 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120588888771 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308072393061 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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